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Concerning this essay, Elmore Leonard's 10 rules of writing came to mind, particularly the 10th rule, the most important one (to me). From memory now, I think it went: When you find yourself writing stuff that readers are going to skip over . . . yes, don't write that.

It's all well and good to focus on the writer (the engine of the output) for the first draft, after all, at that point the writer and the reader are one in the same. Joined at the hip.

However, if you think--as I think--that writing (the final product) is not about the writer and not about the reader, but about the connection that forms when the reader actually reads the final product (after several drafts, corrections, additions and a lot of deletions) . . . then that is where the magic is.

That is the purpose of writing, to achieve that magic. And focusing on writability over readability, or resonance over coherence means missing out on the magic. Paraphrasing Capote (see below), that's drafting, not writing.

I read the first few paragraphs, then became perhaps as drowsy as the writer and began to skip sentences and then paragraphs. Never went back. Since the writer, focused so intently (but drowsily) on spinning it out without much attention to coherence, well then that's what the reader gets stuck with: incoherence. How does the reader react: with growing indifference.

Jack Kerouac, William Burroughs also wrote this way and achieved that sort of incoherence. And indifference.

A good writer has to focus on his process, but if he diminishes the reader's experience, then you end up with what Truman Capote said about On The Road: that's not writing, that's typing.

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And yet, in reviewing the writing that you've done, which has brought you to such powerful conviction, I find nothing (at least not on this profile).

Which isn't to say that you're wrong, but is at least to say that you ought to be careful, because you might be seriously misinterpreting reality.

If being a good writer means not publishing at all, then I would rather be known as a bad writer.

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